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	<title>Comments on: On Editing &#8211; The First Read-through</title>
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		<title>By: Second Wind Exercise</title>
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		<dc:creator>Second Wind Exercise</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 02 Feb 2008 21:33:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: Brandon Satrom</title>
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		<dc:creator>Brandon Satrom</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Jan 2008 00:44:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sarah,

Well, I wasn&#039;t going to point out the coffee-stain culprit... And I&#039;ll certainly let you know if I need helping pouring that French roast of my submission manuscripts. And thanks for all your support. I could never do any of it without you!

Heather,

That&#039;s a great idea, keeping the characters but scrapping the story. I&#039;ll keep that one in mind for the future. I&#039;m certain I&#039;ll need it. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sarah,</p>
<p>Well, I wasn&#8217;t going to point out the coffee-stain culprit&#8230; And I&#8217;ll certainly let you know if I need helping pouring that French roast of my submission manuscripts. And thanks for all your support. I could never do any of it without you!</p>
<p>Heather,</p>
<p>That&#8217;s a great idea, keeping the characters but scrapping the story. I&#8217;ll keep that one in mind for the future. I&#8217;m certain I&#8217;ll need it. <img src='http://brandonsatrom.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Sarah</title>
		<link>http://brandonsatrom.com/2008/01/21/on-editing-the-first-read-through/comment-page-1/#comment-38</link>
		<dc:creator>Sarah</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 21 Jan 2008 18:34:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You&#039;re very welcome for my assistance in the &quot;coffee stains provide manuscripts with a grizzled and distinguished look that almost enhances their quality.&quot; Any time you need me to spill more joe on your hard work to make it more distsinguished you just let me know and I&#039;ll be happy to help! 
Also, congratulations on completing your editing! I&#039;m so proud of all your hard work and can&#039;t wait to read the next draft!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You&#8217;re very welcome for my assistance in the &#8220;coffee stains provide manuscripts with a grizzled and distinguished look that almost enhances their quality.&#8221; Any time you need me to spill more joe on your hard work to make it more distsinguished you just let me know and I&#8217;ll be happy to help!<br />
Also, congratulations on completing your editing! I&#8217;m so proud of all your hard work and can&#8217;t wait to read the next draft!</p>
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		<title>By: Heather</title>
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		<dc:creator>Heather</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 21 Jan 2008 17:46:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>My first read-through depresses me.
How could I write such crap? Is there anything redeeming?
To my first novel: no. The characters are great. I&#039;ll write another novel with them. Scrap everything else.
Maybe my others are salvable.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My first read-through depresses me.<br />
How could I write such crap? Is there anything redeeming?<br />
To my first novel: no. The characters are great. I&#8217;ll write another novel with them. Scrap everything else.<br />
Maybe my others are salvable.</p>
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