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	<description>On writing and becoming a writer...</description>
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		<title>By: Brandon Satrom</title>
		<link>http://brandonsatrom.com/2008/04/11/april-poetic-license/comment-page-1/#comment-928</link>
		<dc:creator>Brandon Satrom</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 21 May 2008 14:07:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Nice, Jeff. :) very well done. I could really feel the angst that you poured into that Haiku... :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Nice, Jeff. <img src='http://brandonsatrom.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  very well done. I could really feel the angst that you poured into that Haiku&#8230; <img src='http://brandonsatrom.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Jeff</title>
		<link>http://brandonsatrom.com/2008/04/11/april-poetic-license/comment-page-1/#comment-923</link>
		<dc:creator>Jeff</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 20 May 2008 22:33:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>What is going on?
Have you been smoking something?
Your poems don&#039;t rhyme.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What is going on?<br />
Have you been smoking something?<br />
Your poems don&#8217;t rhyme.</p>
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		<title>By: Words of Redemption &#187; Blog Archive &#187; The Spring, Summer and (Hopefully Not) Fall 2008 Reading List - Weeks 1 and 2</title>
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		<dc:creator>Words of Redemption &#187; Blog Archive &#187; The Spring, Summer and (Hopefully Not) Fall 2008 Reading List - Weeks 1 and 2</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Apr 2008 14:02:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Words of Redemption On writing and becoming a writer&#8230;      &#171; Home &#171; April Poetic License [...]</description>
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		<title>By: storyteller</title>
		<link>http://brandonsatrom.com/2008/04/11/april-poetic-license/comment-page-1/#comment-419</link>
		<dc:creator>storyteller</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 12 Apr 2008 00:17:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Creatively you’ve
shared with breviety … Haiku
forces clarity.

This is my 1st time participating in Poetic License, but I’ve joined the Haiku Friday crowd weekly on each of my blogs for the past few months.  My ‘Spring’ haiku today is at Sacred Ruminations here today: &lt;a href=&quot;http://sacredruminations.blogspot.com/2008/04/haiku-friday-30-spring-color-from.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Joyful Burst of Color&lt;/a&gt;
Hugs and blessings,</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Creatively you’ve<br />
shared with breviety … Haiku<br />
forces clarity.</p>
<p>This is my 1st time participating in Poetic License, but I’ve joined the Haiku Friday crowd weekly on each of my blogs for the past few months.  My ‘Spring’ haiku today is at Sacred Ruminations here today: <a href="http://sacredruminations.blogspot.com/2008/04/haiku-friday-30-spring-color-from.html" rel="nofollow">Joyful Burst of Color</a><br />
Hugs and blessings,</p>
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		<title>By: paisley</title>
		<link>http://brandonsatrom.com/2008/04/11/april-poetic-license/comment-page-1/#comment-417</link>
		<dc:creator>paisley</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Apr 2008 23:47:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>i refuse to be thrown off by any combination of grammar or typos.. life is way to short to see the nicks,, and not the legs... if you know what i mean...

i loved them all.. i have never been here before.. but i will be back....</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>i refuse to be thrown off by any combination of grammar or typos.. life is way to short to see the nicks,, and not the legs&#8230; if you know what i mean&#8230;</p>
<p>i loved them all.. i have never been here before.. but i will be back&#8230;.</p>
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		<title>By: Brandon Satrom</title>
		<link>http://brandonsatrom.com/2008/04/11/april-poetic-license/comment-page-1/#comment-415</link>
		<dc:creator>Brandon Satrom</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Apr 2008 19:52:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Swampy, Thanks! We&#039;re in Colorado Springs. I wish it was the western slope!

Lana, Thanks!

Pamela, I love a bit of traveling myself, but it&#039;s been a little painful lately.

Karmyn, Thanks for the comment. Hopefully all of this will be resolved before we head back to Colorado on Tuesday... :/ We&#039;ll see...

Robin, Good golly, I should make you an author on my blog with the length of these comments!  Here we go:

a) Thank you. I&#039;ll do my best to write interesting (and error free) material.
b) Hmmm, I actually could argue that there are subtle distinctions. I suppose that I could practice economical word use and still be lengthy if I had plenty to say. But I won&#039;t do so... I just like to use &quot;and&quot; as much as possible.
c) Sadly, yes. Though I never said I was a good one.
d) I certainly hope so.
e) That it would be.
f) Thanks! I&#039;ve incorporated &quot;Wonky&quot; into my regular repertoire and plan use it often until Sarah tells me to stop. Thank Nick Hornby for that one...
g) I hope you do, and return to comment. But only if you don&#039;t point out my typos again...
h) Welcome to Twitter! It&#039;s an interesting place...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Swampy, Thanks! We&#8217;re in Colorado Springs. I wish it was the western slope!</p>
<p>Lana, Thanks!</p>
<p>Pamela, I love a bit of traveling myself, but it&#8217;s been a little painful lately.</p>
<p>Karmyn, Thanks for the comment. Hopefully all of this will be resolved before we head back to Colorado on Tuesday&#8230; :/ We&#8217;ll see&#8230;</p>
<p>Robin, Good golly, I should make you an author on my blog with the length of these comments!  Here we go:</p>
<p>a) Thank you. I&#8217;ll do my best to write interesting (and error free) material.<br />
b) Hmmm, I actually could argue that there are subtle distinctions. I suppose that I could practice economical word use and still be lengthy if I had plenty to say. But I won&#8217;t do so&#8230; I just like to use &#8220;and&#8221; as much as possible.<br />
c) Sadly, yes. Though I never said I was a good one.<br />
d) I certainly hope so.<br />
e) That it would be.<br />
f) Thanks! I&#8217;ve incorporated &#8220;Wonky&#8221; into my regular repertoire and plan use it often until Sarah tells me to stop. Thank Nick Hornby for that one&#8230;<br />
g) I hope you do, and return to comment. But only if you don&#8217;t point out my typos again&#8230;<br />
h) Welcome to Twitter! It&#8217;s an interesting place&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Karmyn R</title>
		<link>http://brandonsatrom.com/2008/04/11/april-poetic-license/comment-page-1/#comment-414</link>
		<dc:creator>Karmyn R</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Apr 2008 17:34:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>When I heard that AA had shut down 10% of their flights - I didn&#039;t think that was so bad.   But 300,000 passengers is a HUGE number.  Sorry you got bumped.

Lovely Haiku&#039;&#039;s really - amazing that you can tell a story in such few words.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>When I heard that AA had shut down 10% of their flights &#8211; I didn&#8217;t think that was so bad.   But 300,000 passengers is a HUGE number.  Sorry you got bumped.</p>
<p>Lovely Haiku&#8217;&#8217;s really &#8211; amazing that you can tell a story in such few words.</p>
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		<title>By: Robin (PENSIEVE)</title>
		<link>http://brandonsatrom.com/2008/04/11/april-poetic-license/comment-page-1/#comment-411</link>
		<dc:creator>Robin (PENSIEVE)</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Apr 2008 16:04:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Well, now...where to begin?

a)  I thought I HAD subscribed to you last month, but when I clicked the link to your page, it hit me I hadn&#039;t seen your blog in my reader.  So, I subscribed.  THEN I read your post.  Whew...I barely avoided the switchin&#039;!!

b)  Does brevity = word economy?  Can you have one without the other?  Were you being redundant or suggesting subtle distinction?

c)  I think you were drunk on tex-mex when you wrote your post.  It&#039;s FULL of typos that gave me reason to laugh at you.  I mean with you.  Because you ARE a writer, right?  

d)  I bet b/c of my letter &quot;c&quot;, I&#039;ll have a dozen typos in this comment.

e)  that would be blog karma.

f)  Geez...I&#039;m just now getting around to your haikus.  What&#039;s up with that?  #1--What are you talkin&#039; about?  In the South we get about 8 days of Spring!  #2--You reminded me about the Seinfeld episode where he explains the difference b/t &quot;taking&quot; the reservation and &quot;keeping&quot; the reservation.  Also, you used the word &quot;wonky&quot;.  Love this one for both those reasons.  #3--I heard the longing in this one; aptly describing the long winter&#039;s hold on Season.  Lovely.

g)  THANK YOU for the encouragement to join the carnival.  You&#039;re a great addition to the mix and now that I&#039;ve added you in my reader, I might actually check out some posts in between.  

h)  I twittered you this morning.  I have no idea what that means, and it sounds &quot;wrong&quot;, but that didn&#039;t stop me.

Ok...I&#039;m done...off to visit more haikus!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well, now&#8230;where to begin?</p>
<p>a)  I thought I HAD subscribed to you last month, but when I clicked the link to your page, it hit me I hadn&#8217;t seen your blog in my reader.  So, I subscribed.  THEN I read your post.  Whew&#8230;I barely avoided the switchin&#8217;!!</p>
<p>b)  Does brevity = word economy?  Can you have one without the other?  Were you being redundant or suggesting subtle distinction?</p>
<p>c)  I think you were drunk on tex-mex when you wrote your post.  It&#8217;s FULL of typos that gave me reason to laugh at you.  I mean with you.  Because you ARE a writer, right?  </p>
<p>d)  I bet b/c of my letter &#8220;c&#8221;, I&#8217;ll have a dozen typos in this comment.</p>
<p>e)  that would be blog karma.</p>
<p>f)  Geez&#8230;I&#8217;m just now getting around to your haikus.  What&#8217;s up with that?  #1&#8211;What are you talkin&#8217; about?  In the South we get about 8 days of Spring!  #2&#8211;You reminded me about the Seinfeld episode where he explains the difference b/t &#8220;taking&#8221; the reservation and &#8220;keeping&#8221; the reservation.  Also, you used the word &#8220;wonky&#8221;.  Love this one for both those reasons.  #3&#8211;I heard the longing in this one; aptly describing the long winter&#8217;s hold on Season.  Lovely.</p>
<p>g)  THANK YOU for the encouragement to join the carnival.  You&#8217;re a great addition to the mix and now that I&#8217;ve added you in my reader, I might actually check out some posts in between.  </p>
<p>h)  I twittered you this morning.  I have no idea what that means, and it sounds &#8220;wrong&#8221;, but that didn&#8217;t stop me.</p>
<p>Ok&#8230;I&#8217;m done&#8230;off to visit more haikus!</p>
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		<title>By: Pamela</title>
		<link>http://brandonsatrom.com/2008/04/11/april-poetic-license/comment-page-1/#comment-409</link>
		<dc:creator>Pamela</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Apr 2008 14:52:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I love haiku - and yours is no exception.  

I was suffering with you on the airline fiasco... in heart only.  Haven&#039;t been traveling recently, thanks goodness.  well. thank goodness I haven&#039;t been flying.   I&#039;d love to do some traveling.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I love haiku &#8211; and yours is no exception.  </p>
<p>I was suffering with you on the airline fiasco&#8230; in heart only.  Haven&#8217;t been traveling recently, thanks goodness.  well. thank goodness I haven&#8217;t been flying.   I&#8217;d love to do some traveling.</p>
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		<title>By: Lana G!</title>
		<link>http://brandonsatrom.com/2008/04/11/april-poetic-license/comment-page-1/#comment-408</link>
		<dc:creator>Lana G!</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Apr 2008 13:14:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Love them!  The flight one is fabulous!!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Love them!  The flight one is fabulous!!</p>
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