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By: Words of Redemption » Blog Archive » July Poetic License

Words of Redemption » Blog Archive » July Poetic License — Fri, 25 Jul 2008 13:37:39 +0000

[...] This isn’t an obscure form that I’ve decided to blame Robin for inventing, as I have done in the past. [...]

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Words of Redemption » Blog Archive » June Poetic License — Fri, 06 Jun 2008 12:31:52 +0000

[...] keeps on making up poetic styles, and I keep on writing poems for them. That’s right, it’s time again for [...]

By: Words of Redemption » Blog Archive » Poetry Becomes a Family Affair

Words of Redemption » Blog Archive » Poetry Becomes a Family Affair — Tue, 13 May 2008 19:22:53 +0000

[...] you see my May Poetic License entry from last week? Did you see the comments? If not, you missed out. The Clerihew theme inspired some [...]

By: Brandon Satrom

Brandon Satrom — Tue, 13 May 2008 17:57:35 +0000

Wow babe, these are great. You made me smile and laugh! I loved them both! Ditto on all of it.

And I love you too!

I think these great poems deserve their own post!

By: Sarah

Sarah — Tue, 13 May 2008 16:34:30 +0000

Okay, despite entering a little late in the game, here’s what I came up yesterday while we were running. Oh how my mind wanders on that treadmill…

Brandon Daniel
My love for you requires no manual
Can’t believe the years since we met have been nine
Being married to you makes me so happy you’re mine!

Or, a slightly different version

Brandon, my love
We fit each other like a glove
Can’t believe the number of years since our wedding are five
Being with you makes me glad to be alive!

Love ya!

By: Brandon Satrom

Brandon Satrom — Sat, 10 May 2008 18:44:23 +0000

Peter, Thanks for stopping by and for commenting. The link you left is broken though, so comment again if you see this. I’d love to check out your site.

Dawn, Thank you for visiting me and for commenting!

By: Dawn @ My Home Sweet Home

Dawn @ My Home Sweet Home — Sat, 10 May 2008 17:02:54 +0000

Those are really good! Love the first one about your mom (good job tying in Mother’s Day). Thanks for visiting me.

By: Peter

Peter — Sat, 10 May 2008 01:22:00 +0000

Hi Brandon, I enjoyed reading your poems and also the ones from commenter’s.

By: Brandon Satrom

Brandon Satrom — Fri, 09 May 2008 21:34:49 +0000

Shauna, BRILLIANT!!! I laughed out loud, and you know how difficult it is to make me do that…

Nice work, for a child of gypsies.

By: Shauna

Shauna — Fri, 09 May 2008 19:20:29 +0000

Ok, I have to try one too since everyone else is doing it!

Brandon, my brother
I sometimes cannot believe that we share the same mother.
You have always said that I was left by a gypsy,
Perhaps it was the one I met today, from Poughkeepsie!