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On Thursday, I got word that my story, “Castaway,” will be published in the Summer issue of the Boston Literary Magazine.

The story is a recent creation, and a “literary” one at that, meaning that it doesn’t feature werewolves, vampires, private eyes, mobsters, purveyors of “the worlds most dangerous game”, hobbits, or quantum physicists from the future. Of course, I have found myself writing in and across most genres over the last few years, and I plan to continue to do so because I think that “genre writing,” when done with skill can be more cathartic and transformative of a reading experience than most straight literary pieces I’ve read of late, while being just as “literary.”

But I digress. I’ll save that discussion for another day.

Back to “Castaway,” the literary story. I really enjoyed writing this story and am pleased with the final result. It was rejected elsewhere, and the editor of the magazine originally passed as well, but included some great feedback for improvement and offered to take a second look if I wanted to resubmit. I was impressed with the critique of the story and instantly recognized the holes in it that she pointed out, so I tweaked the story, first making it longer, then paring it down a bit and raising the stakes.

The story was accepted after the rewrites, and I think it became so much more than it was when I first submitted it.

Here’s an excerpt to whet your appetite:

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from “Castway” by Brandon Satrom

Sheila, Macie and Iona stood at the door. Each girl held a heavy wooden bat against a shoulder. Sheila rattled her car keys and held an extra bat out to Nikki, handle first.

“Where are we going?”

“To the batting cages at Green Acres.”

The black letters that blanketed Nikki sprung back into the air, this time swirling unformed around her roommates. Nikki stared at the bat Sheila was holding out to her.

“You can thank Santo for leaving these with me when he ran off with that reporter last year. I think payment of four signed Louisville Sluggers is adequate alimony, don’t you? He wants them back, of course. But these gems are The New Therapy for the girls at 514 Archer Drive.”

Macie and Iona laughed.

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The issue, published online, is due out in mid-June. If you promise to read it and comment on it on this blog, I’ll post a link when it comes out. I hope you like reading the story as much as I enjoyed writing it.

In the meantime, go check out the great stories and poetry available online in the Winter issue of the Boston Literary Magazine.

The March issue of Niteblade magazine is out and my story “Guzman’s Labyrinth” is contained within. If you haven’t checked out Niteblade before, I’d highly recommend it. Great fiction, reviews and poetry in the horror and fantasy vein.

There is a free version of the issue up on the site, and an add-free PDF available for a couple of bucks, which is a great way to support the magazine.

One of my favorite things about the magazine is that the editor works with a great artist who illustrates a key scene or image from each story. I LOVE the image that was created for Guzman’s Labyrinth. Go check it out and see what I mean. While you’re at it, check out the rest of the great authors and poets in the issue.

And feel free to drop back by here and tell me what you think of Guzman’s Labyrinth.

March 2009 Cover Page (Story links on the right)

Guzman’s Labyrinth

Downloadable PDF (Worth every bit of your $3.50. Support independent publishing!)

HA!

Intentions are great, no?

Lesson #1 on the Words of Redemption blog: Don’t listen to what Brandon says he plans to do until he actually does it.

In any case, NaNoWriMo itself is going swimmingly. I hit 34,224 words this morning, putting me at 68% complete only fifteen days into the competition.

The novel itself, which I estimate to be about 120k+ and take me well beyond December to complete, is about 30% done. I’ve written Book 1 of 3 planned, consisting of seven chapters. All major characters have been introduced, the scene is set and the central conflict is afoot.

All in all, it’s been fun in spite of the fact that I pushed myself too hard these first two weeks and have been suffering from a little more stress and fatigue than a person who doesn’t yet have any children should.

But all is well. My saner half¹ has helped to remind me of what’s really important: that I’m writing and loving it. The second it starts to become more about goals and word counts and writing crap just to finish, I’d just as soon not win NaNoWriMo.

Thanks Sarah. I’d be (more of) a wild-eyed madman without you.

This morning, after I finished Book 1, I went back, did some cleanup on one of my favorite scenes from the first part and posted it on my NaNoWriMo profile page. You can check it out there (click on the Novel Info Tab), along with the great books that other Wrimos in my buddy list are working on.

Because I really, really want you to read it and I know you might not actually click on the link above, I’ll also post the scene below. This is the first scene from Chapter 7. I hope you like it.

Oh, and please keep in mind that this is a first draft excerpt from a first draft book. Typos and awkward writing to follow.

Excerpt: The Siege of Thaddeus Wilkes

“Is he awake?”

“Yes, but he cannot see you yet. He is dressing and finishing his breakfast. It will only be a few minutes.”

Namazzi nodded.

“I will wait here.”

Namazzi stood outside her father’s tent and waited for an audience with Dembe, both as her father and as the Rwot, chief of the village. She needed guidance, above and beyond that of The Regal Man, and she needed encouragement.

Namazzi’s father was a good man, and he had been the chief of Pakwinyo and some of the outlying and smaller villages for nearly twenty-five years, since almost the day she was born. He’d always been well-loved by the people of the village, and was widely respected by nearly all of the Acholi chiefs, many of whom considered his rule and example of how an Acholi village should be run.

Dembe’s primary style was as a benevolent monarch. His decisions were always final, but he encouraged, even demanded, that the villagers always weigh in with their thoughts an opinions. He was also a friend to foreigners, and welcomed any opportunity for the Acholi people in his village to learn from the outside world, and for the outside world to learn about the wonderful Acholi culture and religion.

His friendship with Father Gregory was just one example. Her father and Father Gregory had been good friends for almost the entire time he had been in the village, up until his disappearance fifteen years ago. Father Gregory had almost unrestricted access to her father. And though her father never once came to church, Father Gregory always spoke of her father’s faith and the immense respect he had for the man.

In addition to being the chief, Dembe had been the primary won yat for the village up until earlier this year, when he had asked Namazzi to take over. He was getting older and rarely left his tent anymore. What used to be regular visits to the town center to greet his villagers had recently become a monthly visit to the edge of the market for fifteen minutes before her father was forced to retreat back into the shade of his hut and the constant care of his doctors and advisers.

He was dying, Namazzi knew that, but he would not permit her to care for or even pray for him. She prayed for him anyway, both to Jok and God, that he would recover and continue to lead the village for years to come.

“Namazzi, you may enter.”

Namazzi nodded at the attendant as she walked through the door into her father’s lavish hut. She always liked visiting her father, even when she was a child and had resided with her mother in a much smaller hut behind the Rwot’s dwelling. The hut was a testament to the wealth and power of the Acholi culture, especially the wealth and power that had accompanied Dembe’s rule of the area.

The floor was lined with the skins of many goats, calves and sheep, creating a carpet that was pleasant to walk on, and was in stark contrast to the dirt floors that covered the rest of the huts in the village. Along the walls of the hut hung the spoils of generations of victories by her family. Tribal masks, spears and even the skulls of rival chiefs. Those at the front represented the oldest conquests of her family, while those in the back, closer to her Father’s throne, represented the triumphs of her father and his father before him.

And though warfare between tribes was not as common as it had once been, Dembe had been rumored to have put down a number of small revolts when he was younger, most of which happened before Namazzi had been born. The last of which, according to her mother, was evidenced by a large ragged scar that ran across the length of his face. From what Namazzi could remember of the story she’d asked to hear countless times as a child, Dembe—at the request of his father, who was the chief at the time—had travelled with a small band of warriors to an outlying village. The village attempting to declare it’s independence from Pakwinyo and Namazzi’s Grandfather and had instituted the leader of their revolt as chief. Her father, who had a reputation for always offering peaceful solutions, confronted the man without a weapon in hand. He bowed to the man, extended his empty hands and asked the man that they show respect to his father and their chief and end the revolt. According to her mother, aunt and anyone else Namazzi could convince to tell her the story, the man took his spear and slashed Dembe across the face in response to his peaceful solution. Her father stared at the man for only a moment without speaking. And before the man could plant the spear back in the ground, Dembe had drawn his knife, moved behind the man and had slit his throat. The rebellion was squelched, and no man ever dared cross Dembe again.

Namazzi loved hearing that story.

As she strode through the regal decorations of her father’s tent, she thought about her own birthright. As a woman, she could never be the Rwot. This was something she had made peace with many years ago. Instead, her Father—who had no sons of his own and would be forced to pass his rule along to a distant cousin in another village—had always promised something that she treasured much more than rulership of a physical kingdom. As the healer and the spirit woman of the village, She would be one of Jok’s chosen people on Earth. A man may rule the people, but she would rule the spirits and the earth.

And armed with the final pieces of his faith that Father Gregory had been unable to teach her, even Thaddeus would submit to her authority. If not, he would be removed without question. The Regal Man had promised that the priest would not be an obstacle when the time was right.

Namazzi approached the throne upon which her father sat, bowed low and kissed his hand.

“Good morning, Father.”

Dembe patted his daughter on the head and reached for her hand, to kiss it in return.

“Namazzi. My daughter. It is a joy to look upon you.”

Namazzi wished she could say the same. She remembered a time when her Father was a picture of strength and health. Even the scar on his face had exuded strength to all those around him. Now, her father was dying, at barely fifty-four years of age.

“How are you feeling, Father?”

Dembe licked his lips and allowed his eyes to linger on Namazzi’s face for a moment before responding.

“Not well, my daughter. I fear that my last days are upon me.”

Namazzi shook her head. She would not give up so easily. Jok still had time to heal him. She retrieved a small bundle of bananas from her pouch and extended them to her father.

“Perhaps not yet, my Father. These bananas have been infused with the venom of a nyelo.” A Python. “They have been blessed by Jok himself. The Regal Man has given them to me and…”

“The Regal Man.” Namazzi watched as her father’s lips curled into a pensive and skeptical smile. After only a few seconds, the smile melted into a frown. He did not share his thoughts with her, though she had always known that his faith in certain realities was not as strong as her own. “Put them on the table, daughter.”

Namazzi resisted the urge to take one banana and force her father to eat it in front of her. She placed the bananas on the table.

Dembe leaned back on his throne and stared at the nyara-bok at the ceiling of of the hut, through the opening in the center.

“I think it is too late for magic and healing, my daughter. This disease was created by the sins of mankind, and cannot be cured by the purity of the spirit world.”

Namazzi could not restrain her shock at her Father’s blasphemy. He had always greatly honored the name of Jok, but to doubt his ability to heal? “Father, it is never too late for Jok to intervene.”

Namazzi’s father sighed and looked up his daughter. He was tired, very tired, but Namazzi could see the love and the fire in his eyes. He was in pain, but worse than his pain was the fact that we would not be able to die in combat. She hated for him that a disease like AIDS would take him before the spear of a rival could. She hated that it was his own lusts that caused him to acquire the infection, and that this disease ravaged him slowly over time, eating away at him over the last five years. She hated that he had embraced western medicine and doctors in order to find a cure, and that the disease had steadily worsened. Namazzi could tell he was ready to go, and his fear that it was too late was prof.

“Gwok onyatto cet kany mada.” That dog has passed many of it’s droppings here. In other words, her father was tired of trying. “Namazzi, I have recently decided that Jok desires for me to ascend to heaven in order to rule with him.”

Namazzi dropped to one knee and bowed low at the thought. “That is a great honor, my Father.”

“Indeed, it is. It is a reward for many years of service. But it is also reward for your supplication on my behalf.” Dembe touched the head of his daughter. “For the past five years—since I was infected with this disease—you have done everything in your power to restore my health. In the process, you have surpassed my skill as a won yat. You have grown into a wonderful woman, and I am proud to call you daughter.”

Namazzi shook her head. “But there are still things to do, Father. Joseph Kony is here, we need your strength.” She knew that fear was coming through in her voice, but she did not care. She was not ready to be alone.

“Namazzi, I know that Joseph Kony is here. He is probably here because I am dying. He knows that I cannot stand against him, and that I will soon be gone for good.” Dembe looked at the ground as a solitary tear slid down the side of his face. It was the only tear Namazzi had ever seen from her father. “I would like nothing more than to confront him as a man of honor on the battlefield and die at his hand. But you and I both know that I would die from standing up out this chair.” Her father sighed. “Even still, to die at the hands of that man is no honor at all. Joseph Kony just as soon set this hut on fire while I sleep as confront me face to face.”

“But what shall we do without you, Father? He will kill us all.”

“No, Namazzi. He will not.” Dembe sat up straight and looked at his daughter with fire in his eyes. “He will not, because you will lead your people. I no longer care that our law dictates that you cannot be chief. Your cousin will arrive in three weeks to assume my throne, and you will cede it to him. In the meantime, and while Joseph Kony is here, you will lead this village.”

Namazzi dropped her head and stared at the goatskin run on which she was standing. She dug the toes of her dark feet into the strands of the carpet and looked back at her father. This was more than she had wanted, and Namazzi felt fear rise up within her. It was disgusting—she was not afraid of the black or night or the spirits that inhabited the village—but she could not control it, even as it caused her to speak to her Father.

“But Father, I…”

“The growing millet does not fear the sun, my daughter.”

That was the last word. Namazzi bowed.

“But you cannot do this alone, my daughter. You will need help.”

Help? But from where? Now that Joseph Kony was two miles outside the village, they’d be lucky to continue receiving supplies, much less find anyone willing to aid them. What’s more, many of the surrounding communities had already been assaulted by Kony over the years. Namzzi’s father was the only reason Kony had left Pakwinyo alone for so many years.

“Who will help, me Father.”

“The priest, Thaddeus Wilkes.”

Namazzi curled her lips up in disgust. Even if she liked and trusted the minister, what could would he be to them? Before she could respond, Dembe commented on the state of Namazzi’s face.

“You do not like the priest? After all the years that Father Gregory guided you, what has this man done to harm your respect for the God of the Jews and the Jesus Christ of the Westerners?”

Namazzi weighed her response. In any other state, she would guard her thoughts and words, even to her father. But if these were his last days, he deserved her honesty.

“Thaddeus Wilkes is not Father Gregory. He does not wish to teach me more of his faith. And he does not seem to respect ours. And more, the man does not seem to even believe what he preaches.”

“Nyatte meeri ni nyayo nerri ki dano?” Is your boasting the cause?

Namazzi lowered her head. Only her father could ask such probing questions.

“Perhaps, father. You know I have your pride.” She smiled at Dembe and he laughed and smiled in return. “There is another reason, father. Another reason why Thaddeus Wilkes is not as Father Gregory was to me.”

“Why is that daughter?”

“Because he is in my way.” Her father nodded, but did not reply. “I believe that he is a threat to our faith, and that he will stand in the way of me becoming the true spiritual leader of this village.”

“Namazzi. Father Wilkes has always been quite gracious and kind to me. I have never heard him make a threat or speak an unkind word to anyone in the village. He is here to do God’s work, while you do the work of Jok. Why can you not work together?”

“I do not know, Father.”

“Yes you do Namazzi. Please do not withhold the truth from me.”

Namazzi saw a sternness return to her Father’s eyes, filled with the same fire for battle that had driven him for so many years. That look had always commanded compliance.

“The Regal Man.”

“What of him, daughter?”

“He has warned me that Thaddeus will stand in my way of becoming the true leader of the village.”

Dembe sighed and looked at his daughter with both grace and love. He laughed, which led to a coughing fit, which resulted in Dembe spitting up blood. When he collected himself, he spoke to his daughter.

“My child, I do not say this lightly, so please listen to me.” Namazzi nodded. “I would be careful to trust The Regal Man. Remember that I still am a man of the spirit world myself. I still receive a word from Jok every now and again. I believe that Thaddeus Wilkes is here to help us. To help you, Namazzi. Do not turn an ally into a enemy just because a spirit tells you so. Remember, not all spirits in these woods are here for good.”

Namazzi nodded and attempted to hide her shock.

“But father, The Regal Man has helped us many times in the past.”

“Indeed he has, my daughter. He has been an acceptable link to the spirit world for you for some time.” The chief coughed again and raised his eyes to the ceiling, as if longing to be carried up to heaven. “And I, of course, cannot make your decisions for you any longer. All I ask, is that you give the priest a chance. Will you do that?”

“Yes Father.”

“Thank you.” Dembe lowered his eyes back to Namazzi and settled them on her face. “Now, how much longer do I have?”

Namazzi stared at her Father without speaking for several moments. Within those eyes, she could see the fire fading by the minute. The will of a warrior was escaping her father and her chief. If he lived to much longer, the fire would be out, and could not be recaptured even in the afterlife. Rather than ruling alongside Jok with the same firm benevolence that he’d ruled the area, he’d be reduced to an empty figure on Jok’s court.

As though her Father was realizing as much at the exact same moment that she was, a look of fear crept over Dembe’s face. He was not afraid to die, but he was afraid to die without dignity, claimed by a sickness that could not be seen rather than the hand of a rival.

Namazzi walked closer to her father. His eyes followed her to him, but he did not speak. She watched his eyes move from her face down to a table next to his throne and she followed them, settling on the knife that her father had kept by his side for thirty years. Namazzi looked back at her father and waited until his eyes returned to hers. The fire in them rose. Namazzi leaned in closer to her father and whispered.

“My Father. Today, I am your rival.”

Namazzi picked up her Father’s knife and plunged it into his chest. As she did, the man who had trained her in life, medicine and the ways of the spirit world looked at her and smiled. He raised a hand, placed it upon the hand that held the knife in his chest, and pushed the knife father in.

“Thank you, daughter.”

Dembe died with a smile on his face and the smell of his own blood lingering in his nostrils. Namazzi cried for her Father, before pocketing the knife, wiping the blood from her hand onto her shirt in his memory and leaving the hut.

This was her village now, and she would make her Father, and all the Rwots before him proud.

1. that would be Sarah

Photo By: restlessglobetrotter

NaNoWriMo is tomorrow. So, if you’re considering diving in, or already have, here are a few tips that helped me last year:

1) Meaningless dialogue that would NEVER EVER EVER make it into a published novel can do wonders for your word count.

“What did you have for dinner?”

“For dinner?I had the Chicken Stew that mom used to always make when we were kids.”

“The Chicken Stew? Oh, I love that stew.”

“Yeah, it’s pretty good.”

“Yeah. So how’s mom?”

Just don’t forget to take this kind of stuff out in the second draft. I’m just sayin…

2) Dialogue attributions (He said/ She said) and adverbs are like loose change in the NaNoWriMo parking meter.

“Are you serious?” He said confusedly and markedly angrily.

“Yes, you jerk.” She breathed exasperatedly.

“Well fine then.” He shot back hastily.

“Fine.” She screamed loudly.

3) Tell, don’t show. There’s no time for “showing.”

Jerry looked up at the orange sunrise over the ocean and thought hey, that’s pretty cool. And it was, you should have seen it, but you can’t because this is a novel.

4) If it sounds great when you’re writing it, it’s crap.

You know what I mean…

5) If it sounds terrible when you’re writing it, it’s crap. Or maybe it’s not.

Strange but true.

The bottom line and the REAL tip here is that bad prose on the page counts, Good prose in my head that I can’t seem to get right does not. None of these are real rules of thumb I follow¹ but there is a spirit there that favors progress and getting the job done. If you KNOW you’ll be back over these words again, let future you deal with the awkward prose and clunky dialogue. The editor in you was born for that. But in the meantime, if you want to be successful in NaNoWriMo or any first draft, set your creator free to write like no one will ever read it.

NaNoWriMo profile: TheSatch

1. except that “Show, don’t tell” is an overused and meaningless piece of hooey

NaNoWriMo 2008 is just around the corner. As in tomorrow.

I gotta admit, I’m equal parts excited, scared and wondering what the heck I’m thinking.

Most of you will likely recall that this crazy experiment of me pretending to be a writer started with NaNoWriMo 2007 and has continued on over the last year with this blog and much fun in the world of short story writing, which is only like noveling as Micro Machines are to Formula One cars.

NaNo 2007 was a pretty amazing experience. For the first time in my life, I sat down every day to do something that I’d been wishing on wanting to do for nearly 30 years. It’s no surprise that I haven’t stopped since then.

But as much as I loved NaNo 2007, I have high hopes for NaNo 2008.

For starters, I’m pretty excited about this book, even though it’s not the story I’ve been intending to write for the past ten months. The title is “The Siege of Thaddeus Wilkes” and it’s a novel that started out as a short story that I could never seem to finish, but which I couldn’t seem to let go of. When I considered making it novel-length, the floodgates opened. Now I think I will have a looooong book, but everybody likes a good epic right? I can promise it will be an epic. The picture above is a shot of the bulletin board in my office. That’s all I’m telling about the story, though it says a lot, I think.

Other reasons for excitement:

1. Unlike last years novel, which is no longer with us, I intend to finish this one.
2. I’ve learned a lot more about writing in the last year than I knew during NaNo 2007.
3. I am better prepared this year than last year, having spent the last two months solid planning and researching this novel.
4. Rather than stopping around 50,000 words, I am committed to writing 2,000+ words every day until I finish. My best guess is that this book will come in around 120,000 words, meaning that I’ll be writing from November 1 until December 31. NaNoWriTwoMo or NaNoWriDosMo if you like… Somebody grab the domain name.

In spite of all of this excitement, I must admit that I’m also a little anxious and nervous. I honestly and truly expect, in spite all my writing and prep over the last year, that NaNo will be harder for me this year. Some reasons:

1. Unlike last years novel, which is no longer with us, I intend to finish this one.
2. I’ve learned a lot more about writing in the last year than I knew during NaNo 2007
3. I am better prepared this year than last year, having spent the last two months solid planning and researching this novel.
4. Rather than stopping around 50,000 words, I am committed to writing 2,000+ words every day until I finish. My best guess is that this book will come in around 120,000 words, meaning that I’ll be writing from November 1 until December 31. NaNoWriTwoMo or NaNoWriDosMo if you like… Somebody grab the domain name.

Funny how that works. My strengths may in fact be my weaknesses.

We shall see. Hard or not, you can bet I’ll be crossing the finish line again this year.

I believe I promised daily updates here at one point, but I will only do that once daily word count has been achieved, so don’t be surprised if I post less than daily for the next two months. Be surprised if I post at all for that matter. If you want the daily dose, there’s always Twitter, where I shared my daily progress last year and will do so again this year.

NaNoWriMo profile: TheSatch

Twitter profile: TheSatch

Late last week, I got word that Niteblade Magazine wants to publish Guzman’s Labyrinth in the March 2009 issue.

Being that this blog is primarily about my wandering journey into writing, I thought it was worth mentioning.

I’m certainly pretty excited…

You might remember Guzman’s Labyrinth from a Write What You See entry from a few months ago.¹

I liked the idea behind that story, but it was a bit lazy in parts and had a confusing ending, so I reworked the story and submitted it to a couple of places looking for Horror in the Dystopian vein… horror that lingers and unsettles, that’s my kind of horror story.

Apparently they agreed.

I’ll post a link when the March issue comes out. In the meantime, check out some past issues.

1. Don’t go bother looking for it, I took it down from the original post.

And while I miss being in the mix each morning, there is a good cause: NaNoWriMo is coming post haste and I’ve a novel to plan.

Last year, my planning consisted of some basic outlining and a few pages of notes.

This year, it’s all out. I’ve already been planning for a month and I have a lengthy outline and tons of notes in the works.

But November is coming fast and I need to get back to work, so if you’ll excuse me.

Hope exciting things are happening in your creative world!

1. Yes, I caved and bought an iPhone

In the meantime, how about a whirlwind tour of what’s new with me and (mostly with) Sarah?

For starters, Sarah and I are having a baby! It’s our first, due in March next year.¹

We couldn’t be more excited. Sarah and I are amazed at how God has blessed us over the last five-and-a-half years and we can’t wait to meet the newest member of our clan.

What’s more, thanks to the unbelievably strong genes in the Liles family (Sarah’s side), I can give you an idea of what the baby will look like, should we have a girl:

For the record, that’s my niece, but I’m not kidding. I’ve seen the photographic evidence. You wait…

On the other hand, if it’s a boy, I expect that the also-strong Satrom genes will rule the day:

Anyhow, we couldn’t be happier. Please keep Sarah and the baby in your prayers. Both are doing great so far. Me? I’m just trying to be helpful…

Of course, all other news pales in comparison, so if you’re still reading, I thank you.

Sarah and I recently did a photo shoot with a friend who is getting a side business off the ground.

He’s pretty good, no?

One of these days, I’ll post those pics to Flickr and pass the link around. In the meantime, here’s a link to Jacob’s Flickr page, and the set from this shoot.

Okay, now for the least important stuff: writing news.

1. Upcoming work – The Futuristic Motherhood anthology, which includes my story “A Person of No Consequence” is coming this month. I’ll post a teaser to my story and other details soon. In the meantime, you can order the book here. I’m really excited about this anthology and this story, so stay tuned for more info.
2. Out in the wild – I have three stories out making the rounds as we speak. I expect responses any day on a couple, and expect to wait a while on another. I’m also realizing that I can’t seem to settle on a genre, and I honestly don’t plan to any time soon. Between the three stories out and the one currently being printed, I have 1 sci-fi story, 1 literary piece, 1 crime story and 1 speculative story. Perhaps it’s good to focus, and one day I will, but for now I’m just having fun writing anything and everything.²
3. Short works in progress – On the in progress front, I am working on one more short story that I hope to finish this month or next. This will be likely be the final short story I work on in 2008.
4. The next novel – Why? Because NaNoWriMo is just around the corner…

Well, not exactly, but I’ve already started planning, plotting and outlining my next novel. My plan is to use all of September and October to outline the crap out of this thing, and then spend all of November and December, with NaNoWriMo as the jumping off point, to write the first draft.

So far, I’m pretty excited about the novel I’ve got here. Not at all what I expected to do this year, but that’s what’s making it so exciting!

I also plan to blog a daily chronicle of NaNo this year, so expect the once-a-week blogging to turn into once-a-day for the month of November.

You stay classy, internet.

1. If you follow me on Twitter, you might already know this, so sorry for the repeat
2. In addition to these four stories, I do have two others, but they shall remain apocryphal and unpublished, hopefully forever

I finished The Silent Funeral today.

For better or worse, it’s done.

After another read through and another round of minor, but important changes, it’s time for me to move on.

It’s time for me to release it into the wild and hope that the world is accepting of it.

Is this what the first day of school feels like to a parent?

I read through the story again today, start to finish. I’ve been working on this story for three months, but it had been at least a month since I read through just to read it.

It’s powerful to me. Poignant and moving.

Mostly because it’s so personal. Because I want so much for that story to touch the lives of men, sons and fathers, and be received as an appeal to emerge.

To be the men, the sons and fathers that God intended us to be.

I apologize if that sounds cocky or insincere. I know I am talking about my own story like it’s IT when it may not be.

I might send it out and spend the next year trying to find a home for it, when no home exists.

And that would be fine, because the story touched me.

God has used it to minister to me as I continue to learn how to be a son.

And as he prepares me to become a father.

So we’ll see what happens. There will be water if God wills it.

In the meantime, here’s a excerpt from the first scene of The Silent Funeral.

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Roland turned his own attention to the ceremony. He stared at the casket that held his father until his eyes lost focus. Would this change anything? Could he finally emerge from the shadow of his Father, or would he simply assume the casting of it? Did he even have a choice? As the congregation began to sing, he raised his bottle in the direction of the coffin.

“Here’s to you, pop. Hopefully, they’ll leave you alone up there, and with a full glass. I know that’s how you like it.”

Roland drank until the bottle was dry, grabbed another out of the glove box, and stood listening as friends and family sang “Amazing Grace” in farewell to Louis Stevens.

Since Thursday morning, I’ve been unsettled, uncomfortable and uncertain.

In the grand scheme, these are good, no great, things.

Wonderful and majestic things.

Eternal things.

But in the meantime, I have been shaken.

And it’s time for me to discern a call.

And my response.

I think it looks something like this:

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In the meantime, could I ask you to pray for me?

- Satch